Professional Toolkit: New storyboard

Email from Rob the DOP outlining the reasons why the storyboard had to be redrawn.

First draft storyboard

 new detailed storyboard

when told by Rob the DOP to draw up another storyboard I did research and used reference from David Lynch's film Blue Velvet: the image itself expalins why i used Blue Velvet as reference.

so in all the storyboard had to be redrawn only concentrating on some shots getting the camera movements right and making sure the environmental aspects are incorporated as well. when speaking to the DOP he wanted the first and last shot specifically redrawn making sure the shot was right so when redrawing the shot i simply adjusted the arrow movements in both sketches for the first shot i asked Tom for the test footage he had done with Anne and used this as reference and as you can see on the storyboard redrew the arrows from the top left corner going down to show an horizontall pan across the screen

using this video as example.
the last shot as you can see from looking at the storyboard where it says revised i simply adjusted the arrows to show an 180 pan that the DOP wanted.