SCRIPT
We had another group meeting with only few group members present so the individuals that were present we had a look at the script as this this will be the main structue of our film so Dowan write the first draft.
1st Draft Script
https://attachment.fbsbx.com/file_download.php?id=825331374156065&eid=ASt30eno9kGdbnAREaAHiKbQeRrbswETQQ5dfaEPU1UgOvKcgeZrFscJcfTIEqMFF84&inline=1&ext=1414447857&hash=ASsNkb86PevU3vCG
This first draft was ok we as a group had discussed but needed a much more detailed description of who the person the actor was and needed a little touch up to convey our synopsis better.
2nd Draft
https://attachment.fbsbx.com/file_download.php?id=537492069729090&eid=ASscx4385wBkdKcYMEFkvzNEI7Vt1x27_FmJKJ1-shhWYmxhRzAi5was616pOP7_I5c&inline=1&ext=1414447904&hash=AStkVHqwQFI-FSUv
This second draft when we got together to have a look at it cos again only a few of us attended this meeting, myself, Tom, Lauren, Lucy,Rob and Julia we had a look at the script and decided this second draft still wasn't good enough as it didnt match the story we are trying to tell, so we added advice and links to the script so Dowan can use these and make a better version. As our project will be based around the script as we as a group want a professional piece.
https://attachment.fbsbx.com/file_download.php?id=559886240823512&eid=ASs7xsjon9D4Kw_LqBpkve5YnI-_b4Q_j4gcKEdbU99GtbPkNsO7PmRfvwECTV3rito&inline=1&ext=1414447921&hash=ASv6iFzno5c0Aj3H
Script with advices on.
the links don't seem to be working as they are a Facebook link.
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